Sunday 26 May 2013

Redemption


From dVerse poets pub.

A stream travelled, and a thousand,
parallel, parallel;
on their own hues washing colours iridescent,
life’s own colours,
a glowing sun,  warmth, burning truth
turned all streams to wind,
taking the spirits
they travelled miles and miles,
tasting the very salt;
redemption, liberation
they turned a thousand drops,
moist, true, iridescent
on  cosmic revelation
a million spirit taking wings, fly high,
dazzling, enchanting every spirit,
fly high, high, high…

21 comments:

  1. This has a very lovely spiritual tone to it, Sreeja. Nice!

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  2. What a hopeful vision, filed with fireworks and joy. Can we do it alive or is this death is for?
    Maybe, just maybe we can witness!?

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    1. Sometimes, this happens, when we can see the actual LIFE in everything, but it is momentary I think, loses in the daily life hussle and bussle ....Thanks Susan...

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  3. nice...love the transformation in this...from the streams to mist/steam/spirit..the rather magical end...lovely imagery in your own words...

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  4. tasting salt of redemption indeed.. those spirits travelled far... till they fly high ... magical

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  5. I like the cosmic revelation, a million spirit taking wings, dazzling ~ Creative response to the prompt ~

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  6. a million spirit taking wings, fly high,
    dazzling, enchanting every spirit,
    fly high

    One often reflects and yearn to be with some powers that blend and mould our lives. You've brought us through that journey! Great take sreeja!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you so much Hank, ... a great support...

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  7. redemption, liberation . . . mercy for the human spirit captured in a lovely, spiritual piece.

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  8. Loved the way the bubbles found their way in your words. To rise, high, high...

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  9. Beautiful and creative response to the challenge...I agree there is a spiritual feeling to this...

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    1. Yea of course a little bit spiritual thoughts... thanks Susie...

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  10. you beautifully capture the movement and the ever transforming with this..

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  11. Reading it felt so peaceful and serene ... loved it !!!

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